#1
Here's a rehashed piece I'm trying to (finally) finish to my liking. It's fairly simple; but I like it. The only problem is - I'm not sure where to go with this! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, as I don't want this to go back into my vault until it has been completed!
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#2
I liked it...alot. measure 8 gave me quite a shock lol....But I don?t know what to do with it...In the intro I was thinking about a Violin maybe on measure 3 and then build it up from there...I don?t really like the electric guitars for me they were a little much. Maybe acoustic because it has such a mellow or rather melancholy feel to it...Over all a good piece
#3
Haha, yeah. I was going for a little bit of a surprise, there. The reason I chose the distortion guitar is because it has more of a 'bite' to it; something unexpected from the rest of the piece.
#4
I think the next step is to try to tie the third section in with the rest of the song. The first two section sound cool, but the third section I don't like as much, and I think it would sound a lot better if you made it sound a bit more like the rest of the song. Other than that, it's cool. I'd like to see what it ends up being.

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#5
Well, it's still a work in progress. The third section, where it slows down, is just a bridge; but, thanks for the input, none the less.