#1
I never really mattered to you
I guess i should have known anyway
Its like i get close to someone and they push me away
Why do i have to think about wats going to happen?
Instead of enjoying the feeling while it lasted
Its not like i knew u weren't gonna care
But I guess nothing was really there
I shed my tears as they fall down my cheeks
But I don't care cuz you never really mattered to me

just something i wrote and i felt like posting...
If you don't like me for who i am
then don't like me for who i am...
but all your gonna get is who i am.
#2
I shed my tears as they fall down my cheeks
Thats kind of redundant isn't it? This is fine though, its not incredably unique though, but its short so if you're going to write more for it I would try to make it less predictable and cliche.
#4
i think its good . everything anymore is cliched so as long as u can say it in a different way its fine . good job