#1
My first song posted here.

Can you feel the morning?
Do you see the air?
Why is where I go
I see you everywhere

I went over to the fire
And glanced deep in your eyes
I know that you never wanna
But you told me It?s a surprise

Do you see what I see?
Do you hear what I feel?
Bury you out of the hole your in
Can you see past my skin

I saw you in the creek one day
And I saw it in your eyes
Looking a bit past the skin
To the man who told you lies

So I went to the river and thought
What is that I?ve done
When can I get you out of that hole your in
When can I call you one

Do you see what I see?
Do you hear what I feel?
Bury you out of the hole your in
Can you see past my skin?

What is it you don?t want to see
Why do you run when I?m near
There?s some you don?t like in me
Come on now there?s nothing to fear

Do you see what I see?
Do you hear what I feel?
Bury you out of the hole your in
Can you see past my skin?

Do you see what I see?
Do you hear what I feel?
Bury you out of the hole your in
Can you see past my skin?
#3
My only criticism is that it jumps around quite a bit. From the fire, to the river, to the creek. I'm lost! Check out my song (Untitled).