#1
Just wrote this the other night...

A deal is a deal
And I signed my name
Signed my life away
On the dotted line

A deal is a deal
So I?ll play along
Take all you can from me
Take it all away

No one ever reads
The fine print
No one cares to
Take the time
No one will ever
See the catch
Signed my life away
On the dotted line

Set up from the beginning
I fell into your trap
It was too good to be true
But I didn?t notice
Until it was too late
I didn't notice
Until it was too late

I signed my life away
All on a dotted line

Take it all from me
Take it and don?t look back
Take everything from me
Take it all from me

No one ever reads
The fine print
No one cares to
Take the time
No one will ever
See the catch
Signed my life away
On the dotted line

I Signed my life away
All on a dotted line
#3
its a bit repeditive, repeating phrases 3 or 4 times

but its still good

but im a noob so don't listen to me
#5
This is pretty good. It sort of doesn't go past the main idea, though. Try branching out.
"People who see life as anything more than pure entertainment are missing the point."