#1
4am...kinda threw this out, enjoyed it, very mellow...pardon the falsetto harmony, i needed something new to throw into it towards the end...can get a bit repetitive i'm sure...bare with it please, we all know it's a nice song. Enjoy everyone, crit 4 crit you musical people you.

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#2
All in all, a very good cover. You manage to bring a whole new wave of emotion on with this song, which is quite a task. I'm impressed.
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#3
Hey, your good at this recording thing... Enjoyable. though i like how the original kept pace with drums... made the song more tolerable... I suggest playing it a bit faster to heighten the mood a bit... as you said, a bit repeatitive.
#4
Very interesting. Vocal effect gives it a really mellow feel. My only issue is with your voice. You're a great singer, but just because it's a slow, mellow song doesn't mean you can't have a little energy. Quite goof for 4 AM though.

And if you plan to do anything with it, a nice little synth string background would be a nice touch for parts. Espcially in the second verse.

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#5
lol yeah i was thinking of adding something in the second verse, maybe bass or something, synth would be cool though, got a usb keyboard coming tomorrow, synths would match the mood
#7
This was pretty good. Cool what you did with the voice harmony. And great cover of Crazy Train, too.
#8
Nice guitar work, im not keen on the vocals but i cant fault them, just personal taste, im not sure about the harmony, it sounds a bit tacky. Otherwise nice song.

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#9
i liked it
but bass wouldve been cool
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#13
hm your cover is good.. but it's too melancholic imo. Californication is no sad song.
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#14
very very good
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Deiphobos: no matter what kind of song californication is, everyone is entitled to conceive and reinterpret a song however they like. I give two huge thumbs up for creativity
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Deiphobos: no matter what kind of song californication is, everyone is entitled to conceive and reinterpret a song however they like. I give two huge thumbs up for creativity

you're right.
I thought it said "cover" but it doesnt
so whatever he did to it iz okay.
#18
I like it mate. Solid and different. Nice little solo in there. Very good interpretation.

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#21
Not bad at all.. Like the mellow voice.
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