#1
hey guys,
so last night i woke up at 4 in the morning and couldnt sleep, so i picked up the guitar and started to write a song, and this is what ive come up with. Its a metal song, and its pretty heavy. I think the sound quality came out really good too, any crit would really be appreciated.
peace
-jerod

the song is called "Not Finished"
www.myspace.com/jerodgee
#2
pretty cool....i like the name, very original

just work on the tone
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#3
Wow, that is pretty chunky, guitars chugging along to that double bass.
I dont really like that lead tone in the intro sections, they sound a bit too tinny, they need to be a bit smoother, maybe boost the mids a little.

Other than that, you have some pretty sick riffage going so far. Complete the song dude, and check out mine if you have the chance.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=406975
Last edited by GardenGnome26 at Aug 4, 2006,
#4
you kick major ass man.i'm a fan.i listened to all of the songs you have on there.thats my kind of music man.keep it up.
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