#1
ALL CRIT WELCOME... as a matter of fact i love hearing what other people think

Just another long drive home,
thirteen hours on the road,
let the smoke settle into your lungs,
we are never alone,
the radio will keep us company,
losing the battle against sleep,
this is how we make dreams,
this is you here beside me,
this is tranquility,

on and on and on,
we turn the pages in this book,
living these songs without a reason,
believeing without a hook,
eighteen years i have dreamed of this stage,
i dont know where to go from here,
its loud,
but i cant see a thing,

just sit, and take it in
realize the beauty in the sky,
every cloud i see in your eyes,
finding the beauty in the light,
we search for,
just a few more mixed up words,
sometimes the greatest need a rope,
when im at this loss of words,
the night falls,
but you are my fleetin hope

on and on and on
we try to destory reality,
bend it through our will,
just to get a little peace,
right now we cannot change,
and i doubt we ever will,
its loud,
but i cant see a thing,

after a while, it all kind of fades away

Just another long drive home,
twenty nine hours on the road,
all these signs,
point me in every other way to go,
tell me,
who am i meant to be,
are you meant to be with me,
this is how we make dreams
#2
Good song i thought it was well written
Do you by any chance have music written to it
I'd be curious to see how that was

Keep writing the tunes
Zoso777 aka Craig
#3
Just another long drive home,
thirteen hours on the road,
let the smoke settle into your lungs,
we are never alone,
the radio will keep us company,
losing the battle against sleep,
this is how we make dreams,
this is you here beside me,
this is tranquility,

This bit is awesome, reminds me slightly of 'There Is' by Box Car Racer. What kind of genre is it for? I love the bit about clouds in the eyes...really good imagery there.