#1
Please tell me what you think,

Be At Peace

[Verse]
The sky cries
I see the sparkle in your eyes now
Something?s wrong but
Justified by vindication somehow
Don?t bother to pretend
I can see it?s happening again

[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace

[Verse]
So I run now
I run and scream so hard, I pass out
And wake up next to you, your sleeping
And then this vision of you weeping
Creeps into my head, like demons in my brain
And then you?re gone

[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace

[Bridge]
And now, I think I know
That I?ve just lost an angel
And I won?t ever get her back
Guess it?s time too, too fade to black

[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
#2
Verse]
The sky cries
I see the sparkle in your eyes now
Something?s wrong but
Justified by vindication somehow
Don?t bother to pretend
I can see it?s happening again
i really loved the way you started

[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
i think you mean telling me instead of tell me... i dunno
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
didnt like the so ill walk away part, but maybe thats just me
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace
really liked the way you ended this

[Verse]
So I run now
I run and scream so hard, I pass out
i think you mean ill pass out instead of i pass out...that would make more sense
And wake up next to you, your sleeping
i didnt like the your sleeping part... you could change it into when youre sleeping
And then this vision of you weeping
Creeps into my head, like demons in my brain
And then you?re gone
this part was good
[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace

[Bridge]
And now, I think I know
That I?ve just lost an angel
instead of an you could say my that makes it more personal, and gives it a lill more emotion
And I won?t ever get her back
Guess it?s time too, too fade to black
personally i didnt like the last line

[Chorus]
I just hate, too see you this way girl
Something inside of me, keeps tell me
That we won?t make it now
So I?ll walk away, and try to forget you somehow
Forget us now, and our urgencies
And forever be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
Be at peace
overall i think it was good, maybe if you change a few things it can be really good... but yeah thats up to you

Steph
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