#1
Well one day I sent my mind to something
Don't really remember what it was
But I said I would to it
Soon my journey would begin

Every day and every week
I would go about my dream
Didn't really care how long it took
Or how high of a mountain I had to climb

Time went by and still no solution
It seem I never conquer the mountain
Everything started to collapse
I had dreams I'm running from

(Chorus)
I was forgetting my dream
Forgetting to put more fuel to keep the fire burning
Letting down what I had in mind
Dreams that I'm running from

So now I still try to make the climb
And make it to the peak
Where I my dream is waiting
So my work will not be in vain

Chorus x2
#2
It's ok man. Not your best though. Keep it up. It looks as if your writing is struggling. Just keep wit it and you'll get outta it.
#3
Well one day I sent my mind to something
Don't really remember what it was
But I said I would to it
Soon my journey would begin
I assume the first line has a typo, and "sent" is supposed to be "set." This is good, and an interesting lead. It makes me want to continue. So, kudos to that. The only thing I would possible change is the last line. I beleive it would sound/read better as "and soon my journey began," or the same thing without the "and." As it is, it just sounds a little akward.

Every day and every week
I would go about my dream
Didn't really care how long it took
Or how high of a mountain I had to climb
This is pretty much all dandy. Though, climbing high mountains is a thought that has seen reproduction many times. I still like this stanza though.

Time went by and still no solution
It seem I never conquer the mountain
Everything started to collapse
I had dreams I'm running from
This is interesting. The second line though, is it supposed to say something else? I feel like you were going for "it seems I will never counquer the mountain" or "it seems I never conquered the montain." As it is, it kind of doesn't make sense. Probably just typos though. (I have like 50 million of them every time I type ANYTHING because my fingers are fat and my keyboard small. haha.

(Chorus)
I was forgetting my dream
Forgetting to put more fuel to keep the fire burning
Letting down what I had in mind
Dreams that I'm running from
It's all good, and creative. The only thing I don't like is the length of the second line. It throws the flow off.
So now I still try to make the climb
And make it to the peak
Where I my dream is waiting
So my work will not be in vain
I think all of the lines could stay the same, in essense, but maybe make a few tense changes, and take a few extra words out. Just play with the wording a little while saying pretty much the same thing. It's good. Just needs tweaking.

Chorus x2

It's good, but needs a little bit of work. The work I speak of is almost entirely grammar/wording. Nothing big. I like it though.

if you could get around to crit'ing my newest- the link of which is the BIG link it my sig- I'd greatly appreciate it.