#2
heh, that was pretty cool!
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zack wylde les paul custom
randy rhoads v custom
120 watt crate amp
505 zoom processor
ibanez weeping demon wah


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-me
#4
sounds sloppy,polish it up and kill the leads whan you play them.show that axe who's boss.
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#6
Some very cool melody with great riffage and cool fast drum beat which makes me headbang. The vocals are not that good as the melody of the song (dont take it the wrong way mate) they're just sloppy .

The solo was very good with no mistakes . The only thing i didnt like about the solo were the high pitched notes at the end of the solo but it was very good nevertheless.

To sum up : the only thing you should do is work on the vocals . this particular song was very cool and POWERfull.
i'll go check your other songs.

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#7
Quote by Necrolust
Some very cool melody with great riffage and cool fast drum beat which makes me headbang. The vocals are not that good as the melody of the song (dont take it the wrong way mate) they're just sloppy .

The solo was very good with no mistakes . The only thing i didnt like about the solo were the high pitched notes at the end of the solo but it was very good nevertheless.

To sum up : the only thing you should do is work on the vocals . this particular song was very cool and POWERfull.
i'll go check your other songs.

Crit mine ? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=407637



I am listening to yours now.

Yes, my vocals isn't that good, hehe.
#8
damn that is some fast double bass on them drums haha.... vocals need work though.