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Green
6 50%
Orange
6 50%
Voters: 12.
DanteR*
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2005
664 IQ
#1
Sorry for the wait dakmac, I finally got around to making this...

Lethistence

Weakened by the tapeworms in your eyes
Scratching and clawing at your dilated pupils
Shut the hell up you nihilistic nitwit and,
Jam another placebo down your throat

The line between right and wrong
Is beginning to grow blurry
Unreliable and remarkably worried,
Sooner of later you?re going to have to,

Wake up and smell the penicillin,
You medicated mannequin
I swear to god,
Your ignorance will be my hearse

Powerless against the after waves,
Ravenous tides pull you under
Shut the fùck up you nihilistic nail and,
Fall between the devil and the deep blue sea

Get up and chew on the bullet,
You angst-ridden adolescent
I swear to god,
Your immaturity will be my hearse

Weakened by the tapeworms in your eyes
Scratching and clawing at your dilated pupils
Shut the hell up you nihilistic nitwit and,
Jam another placebo down your throat

Wake up and smell the penicillin,
You medicated mannequin
I swear to god,
Your ignorance will be my hearse

Comatose from asphyxiation,
Another ruined replica
Swallow down the pill they
Call ?Life?


Darkness' Retreat

The sun sets on this fateful day
Full of spite and anger
You gaze from your doorstep
At land that reeks of decay

The moon rises on this dreadful night
Without hope and peace
You start to catch some reasoning
but it fades out of sight

The wind seems to whip
And the air begins to chill
At this precise moment
Time seems to stand still

See, now all is lost
And a spark can't be found
In the running streams
And in the icy frost

Now fire reigns down
From the midnight sky
But at least I know that
The sun shall soon rise
#1 synth
Weeow!
Join date: Mar 2006
7,350 IQ
#2
Dakmac you actually really impressed me, having seen none of your pieces I assumed you were just a random n00b who had no idea what he was doing (no offence ) but this was a very nice piece. Howerver, Dylan's was also very good and seemed to stroke me in the right way so all my stuff flew over the screen... if you see what I'm saying. Dante FTW.
dakmac
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
122 IQ
#3
Green. I like mine. But Dante's is great.lol
dakmac
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
122 IQ
#10
DANG...i'm seriously surprised. . I thought you'd beat me bad, thanx for doin the comp Dante. Good job.
dakmac
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
122 IQ
#14
Oops...um how do we decide a tie??????????