i havent posted anything in forever, let alone check any of the new songs on here, but this is what i came up with while moving accross the country, not much, and i dont think its that great, i think it has potential, i just havent found it yet, lol, i want to put a real slow melody in the last bar, that builds and builds, i dont know, what do you think, any comments are welcome, thanks for listening!!!
interesting sound, the whole thing just sounds a little off to me though, nothing really seems to fit quite right in with anything else
yah, its kinda just a bunch of ideas that i threw together into one song, lol, thanks for the comment!!!
i think it has potential as well. i think your idea of building up to something a little faster would be fore the best. I felt like it wanted to go somewhere, but it just steadily stayed in one spot. Sorry i cant really think of any suggestions, but it reminds me of a song that would fit with a train ride
lol, i couldnt put it any better myself NoBOO, thanks for the comment, i am trying to build it and go faster, but i cant think of how to do it, yet, lol, thanks!!!
I liked the building up of the first song, and it does need to be faster. It just seems kind of lethargic now and speeding it up should change that. I liked the second idea (measures 13-16, to be precise.) The chords flowed nicely, even if they were a little dissonant.
Thanks for the crit.
Thanks for the crit.
no. . .thank you, lol
i actually thought it had a cool sound, mainly the first riff, keep it going
I personally thought it was really good. Only problem is, in the measures where the 3 guitars started playing together, it seemed like it was building up, but then it went nowhere. Even though I loved the last 2 measures (They sounded like Metallica's Sanitarium). But yeah, I think this definitely shows some potential. Just keep working on it.
yah, i agree with how it builded up, and then went know where, that bothers me, but im currently working on it, ans some other songs, so as soon as there done, ill post