I don't really know what crit to give, sorry, but I liked it. It was a cool little piece.
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Every time I see your avatar I want to slit your neck with a butterknife. Goddamn Pingu.
Im sure it was fun to jam, as it always is with friends. With all that noise you were making in there, shouldve gotten electric guitars up in the bitch. If these are ALL ORIGINAL ideas then props, and still cool if the chords were borrowed from somewhere.

Needs more of you playing backing and your friend takin the solowork.

overall tight. Hit up my solo with a crit www.purevolume.com/gabemendoza