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Hi please critique i would really appreciate

My pride is filtered
So discoloured
Hidden under newer layers
Hindered by all the lies
Appreciation denied

And you?re the same, you?re the same
Never altered, never seem to cry
You?re the same, you?re the same
Never feeling raw, you never cry

My esteem is filtered
Watered down
Shrunken by the bigger stones
Squashed and made to break
Appreciation denied

And you?re the same, you?re the same
Never altered, never seem to cry
You?re the same, you?re the same
Never feeling raw, you never cry

Are you alive inside?
Are you alive?
Are you really feeling there?

Acting like your scientific
No emotions, no feeling

Are you alive inside?
Are you alive?
Are you really feeling there?

And you?re the same, you?re the same
Never altered, never seem to cry
You?re the same, you?re the same
Never feeling raw, you never cry

Are you alive inside?
Are you alive?
Are you really feeling there?
Live and let die
Last edited by shell145 at Aug 5, 2006,