#1
Red hollow spheres

Another day, another hopeless dream
Grief draws the colours from this feeble heart
Memories infect these bored, crimson eyes
Why must this pain of love be the worst kind in life?
Don?t tell me why, I want to walk away dressed in the agony of wonder
My child, every life is numbered and we just wait here till the day that we expire

Let us shut our doors, let us forget the past
Lets erase our memories with the 8 degrees liquid drugs
And then we?ll watch some television and fall asleep in each others arms

Another day, another bullet dodged
But we fall right into the misery that caused the effect
Why continue if we already know the end of this tale?
For our children are the future that will correct the past?
Slowly the candle burns, and we are the life threatening moan
Will we ever get over this heaven and transcend?
My child, I?m feeling down, so lets bring ourselves a little bit higher

Two people standing eye in eye, the truth rips apart their flesh
The stench penetrates their clothes while they vomit on the floor
The light takes over the dark, is this the battlefield or the hospital?
I still here them whisper; ?don?t worry, you?ll be fine?
#2
wow, i love it.

is this a song or poem? if song what type of music?

nice job man.

I am kinda torn betweent his part, I might would take out the end to make it :


Let us shut our doors, let us forget the past
Lets erase our memories with the 8 degrees liquid drugs
then we?ll watch some television and fall asleep in each others arms

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#3
really loved it i jst had a very serious break up and it seems like its me your talkn bout. a very good attribute in a song in my opinion. crit mine if you can in a few mins itll be called falling to pieces.
there are doors that open
there are doors that dont

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#4
It?s written as an poetic/technical (or whatever you wanne call it) hardcore song.

Its actually about someone who got drafted into war without wanting to, and he just wants to be at home with his girlfriend instead, but any interpretation is fine by me .