#1
Puppet


Fire in my eyes
Screaming you all should ****ing die!!
Wondering where I went wrong
Remembering its not really my fault?.


Breaking through
Screaming through
Im not jumpin through your ring of fire again
Daring to try my patience again
Im gunna break you down my friend

Your puppet I am no more

Anger pushing through
Feeling that I am due some faith
Thinking that it?s all your fault
You know, it is ur fault you know!!!


Breaking through
Screaming through
Im not jumpin through your ring of fire again
Daring to try my patience again
Im gunna break you down my friend

Your puppet I am no more


Daring to scream about this hell
Dropping into my torture cell
Screaming I need to be alone!!!!!!!

Your puppet I am no more
#2
it is pretty decent i think:

Anger pushing through
Feeling that I am due some faith
Thinking that it?s all your fault
You know, it is ur fault you know!!!


needs some work but im drawing a blank on suggestions.

ill come back later and check it out.

check out my song if you get a chance "today's the day"
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=407592
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Schecter Stilleto Deluxe bass
BC Rich Bronze Warlock (for sale)
Zoom 18 Amp (for sale)