#1
Hey dudes. This is a song with lots of instruments that will blow you away (with its gayness or its awesomeness) it up to you to decide weather its good or bad.
PLease take a look and tell me what you think .
It has drums , pianos , guitars , bass guitar , Strings , pizzicato strings , violin , cello choir and all kinds of shiit. rofl ..

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Last edited by Necrolust at Aug 5, 2006,
#3
Quote by arms_cant_Reach
Very predictable. It did everything I thought it would.


I did my best to make interchangable riffs and melodies but i guess that wasnt good enough .. peace though .. I respect your opinion .
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#4
i still think its awesome, though the drum beat that comes in with stacatto doens't sound very good, i liked the intro a lot though, it was very nice
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#5
Man i love at around the one minute mark when that main riff comes in, that sounds awesome...To me, it would sound a lot sicker with a bit more contrast, i like what you've done in the intro with the soft piano, i reckon you should have used that again somewhere in the middle of that last two minutes where its pretty much just repeating itself.

Arg, i'm not that good at explainin myself... anyways, could you check out my song at https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=408677
#6
The intro sounded pretty good, I liked the main riff when it first comes in, I couldn't decide if I liked the piano/violin? that came in around 1:36, the melody started to get good for a little bit then it lost me. Sounded pretty dang good overall.

mine - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=408712
#7
pretty pretty cool. i loved the intro, and the guitar melody on it, pretty cool. good note choise on the riff. i like when the strings kick in, kinda reminds me of cradle of filth a little (early cradle), so i thought it was pretty cool. i think you should defenitly add onto it, and have a solo section for the guitar, it seems rather short. pretty cool track overall

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=406809
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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