#1
Dark Is The New Light

You see the night
You realise
Just how much this world has changed
for the worse

The days get shorter (dark is the new light)
The days get colder (dark is the new light)
Today is not a game
The night is not the same
Dark is the new light

Witness first hand
This is youre promise land
It's not youre day
Lets hope it's not too late
For this repent

The days get shorter (dark is the new light)
The days get colder (dark is the new light)
Today is not a game
The night is not the same
Dark is the new light

Take me away
And cut me down again
Take me away
And fill my life with lies
Take me away
I dont want to feel this way
Take me away
Let me abandon this

The days get shorter (dark is the new light)
The days get colder (dark is the new light)
Today is not a game
The night is not the same
Dark is the new light

it's not going away
it's here for all to see
and it's gonna stay
but i like it
this new light
#2
First of all, the title got my attention. Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this song. I thought it flowed very well. The rhythm and the rhyming scheme were both great. Oh and the wording was good as well. Keep it up man.

Crit mine please

Goddess