#2
Vocal mix is crap, can't hear it much and some of it is out of tune. Guitar is very nice, though. The simple piano is cool. Once the dirty version of the original riff comes in it doesn't sound too good. It moves in and out of time throughout. Eventually the vocals seem to take over. I do like the subtle flange on the vox, though. Overall I like the song, but the execution leaves something to be desired.

I like the other song, too. It seems to be better mixed and performed, plus the cross-pan on the guitar is cool. Drums need to be up. Probably could have been sped up 20 bpm. Some of the solo was a little out of time.

My song
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6419057#post6419057
Last edited by fleaflicker182 at Aug 7, 2006,