#1
this a song i have recently finished writing for my band (influenced by the Dead Kennedys, Flogging Molly, AC/DC, Black Flag, Rise Against, Anti-Flag, SOAD, Zeppelin, Sabbath, ect.)

like a lot of the songs i've written, this uses metaphors along with direct lyrics to express my point, and includes thoughts of: polititions abusing democracy, saddam hussien's regime and other war pigs, terrorists, and dictators. along with the "total control" of ones army and the brain washing of third-world country citizens. *coughnorthkoreacough*

let me know what you think...
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It's not right
Can't you you see?
Politions hide
Behind Democracy
Citizens starving
In the streets
No one left to march
On tyrany!

(pause for music)

Innocent victims
Of cruelties rage
Not another endless
Pointless crusade
Nothing to justify
Kill all those who see
Nothing's going on
Leave us be

(two/four measures of music, without lyrics)

March and obey
Question and die
Doesn't matter what's said
It's all just lies
March and obey
Run and hide
Forgiveness is gone
Buried alive

A mother's cry
Silenced by blood
A soldier died
A family's grudge
(pause)
A prisoner gased
Sat in your palace
Sat down and laughed

March and obey
Question and die
Doesn't matter whats said
It's all just lies
March and obey
Run and hide
Forgiveness is gone
Buried alive

(another brief measure or two of just music)

Carry the band
Company yield
Never to stand
Bodies burn in the field
Everyone dies
Move on ahead
Leave them lie!

March and obey
Question and die
Doesn't matter whats said
It's all just lies
March and obey
Run and hide
Forgiveness is gone
Buried alive

Left to rot
None can stray
I'll never be caught
run away
stay down low
move at night
(pause)
raise your fist
ready to fight

March and obey
Question and die
Doesn't matter whats said
It's all just lies
March and obey
Run and hide
Forgiveness is gone
Buried alive

Your reign ends
Society decays
Take down the wall
(pause)
Watch it fall
Haul it away
No one left to...
OBEY! OBEY! OBEY!
obey...obey...obey...obey...

(guitar solo)

March and obey
Question and die
You have nothing left
No one to cry
March and obey
Run and hide
Your dreams are lost
Left behind

(guitar solo countinues)

March and obey
Question and die
Your paradise of
Brain washed minds
March and obey
Run and hide
Humanity is dead
None can survive!
Last edited by live2fight at Aug 6, 2006,
#2
Awesome!!!Really awesome!Hope it doesnt offend you,but I can certainly see the RATM,Rise Against and Anti-Flag influence in this one!Stick it to the man!
#4
yeah man pretty damn gud. have a look at mine if you can, theyre education and falling pieces. tanks
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#5
loving this song....really see the influences kick in...and this is just a suggestion/question.....have you ever looked or listened to slayer lyrics, you may not like them, their music, but when you look at the lyrics....example mandatory suicide....theres alot of stuff written like the stuff your into....
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#6
i like some of slayers stuff, guitar riffs are awesome, but i really dont like the whole "satanic/**** religion" thing, but yeah, they do have some really good lines
#10
i like it a lot... (maybe cause we have almost identical influences.) sorry if you consider this a bad crit, but i really can't think of anything for you to construct. could you crit mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=415975