#1
Ignore my words
He'll be leaving soon enough
Try to understand
He's not an ordinary man
Bring him down
He's not gonna stay forever here

Will it come out?
Will you give in?
When will you leave?
When will you listen?

Listen to her voice
Does it sound like the reason?
Listen to his
Does it sound like treason!

You could just let him in
But never the less
Will he be sooner out
Break down the barriers
Bring out the warriors
Let them unleash
Let them unleash hell!

Will it come out?
Will you give in?
When will you leave?
When will you listen?

Listen to her voice
Does it sound like the reason?
Listen to his
Does it sound like Treason!

Listen hard
Just listen
You dont have anyones regards
Listen deep
Listen well
It's youre turn to yell
F***

plz crit
#2
It's good, although it does seem a little.. cliché? Sorry but rhyming Reason with Treason.. hmm..
#3
I agree with that
but i couldnt think of anything else to put
and the song is about one of my mates that always used this chick that no one liked
i tried to get her to say no but low and behold yes she said and low and behold he used her.

treason just sounded like the right word
i'm open to a suggestion though
#4
The idea behind the word being used is good but i just don't think it'd sound good in the song.. maybe..


Listen to her voice
Does it sound like the reason?
Listen to his
Does it sound like honesty?

It doesn't have to rhyme. Just throw in a word that'll still fit the song, sounds good, has enough impact.. IMO the rhyming on the chorus detracts from it in this particular instance.