#1
Well here it is:

   (--------------------------------PM-------------------------------) 
e||-------------------------------------------------------------------||
B||-------------------------------------------------------------------||
G||--6-6-6-6-6-6-6/2-2-2-2-2-2-2/11-11-11-11-11-11-11/9-9-9-9-9-9-9/--||
D||--6-6-6-6-6-6-6/2-2-2-2-2-2-2/11-11-11-11-11-11-11/9-9-9-9-9-9-9/--||
A||--0-0-0-0-0-0-0/0-0-0-0-0-0-0/0--0--0--0--0--0--0-/0-0-0-0-0-0-0/--||
E||-------------------------------------------------------------------||

Guitar 2: 
e||--0~----------0/0-----------0/0-----------------0-/0-----------0/--||
B||--0~----------0/0-----------0/0-----------------0-/0-----------0/--||
G||--6~----------6/2-----------2/11----------------11/9-----------9/--||
D||--6~----------6/2-----------2/11----------------11/9-----------9/--||
A||--0~----------0/0-----------0/0-----------------0-/0-----------0/--||
E||-------------------------------------------------------------------||

So yeah, what do you think?
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#2
You at least tried and deleted your thread when you realized that it wasn't showing correctly here... so I fixed it for you.

If you want to see how its done... just click this link: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/announcement.php?f=46#2.2

It gives a somewhat detailed explanation of how to make your tab "look right".

If you have any questions, please feel free to PM me and I'll try to help you out.
#3
IMO change the 0-6-6 part to 0-7-7
other than that awesome riff!
#5
I like the chords. I say keep it 0-6-6. I like the harmony when you strum out the full chord with the 0-6-6-0-0. Keep going with it and see what you come up with.

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