#1
Yeah just wrote this, inspired by a recent run in I had with the law.. It could use some improvement I think... If you don't condone the use of cannabis thats fine but please no comments like "shut up your dumb stoner" or anything of that nature would be appreciated...


What law can deny that gift so sweet
So natural that God has
Given it to me

Green is the prime color of the world
And what that which brings wisdom and peace
Arises from the earth

These flowers so splendid with glory
Waking in the dawn of morning

I think that I will never see
A sight as lovely as those tree's
But until the tyrants grip falls
I'll never see a tree at all

He that plants tree's
Loves others beside himself
But he that chops them down
Loves nothing but his wealth

Sometimes you may walk in groves
Which full of majesty will advance the soul

And see the peaceful plants extend
Their myriad leaves in leisured dance
They bear the weight of sky and clouds
For this we must speak for them loud

My best friend in the world
Is the humble green
It's the greatest resource on earth
When used respectfully

What law can deny that gift so sweet
So natural that God has
Given it to me


Please any criticism would be appreciated
#2
amen!!!!!!!!!!! You rock man... rasta life forever!

pretty good on the lyrics, but the whole thing about not really rhyming is killing me!
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#3
Quote by ltzpaintball
amen!!!!!!!!!!! You rock man... rasta life forever!

pretty good on the lyrics, but the whole thing about not really rhyming is killing me!


Thanks man, but trust me, the way I sing it (or more like the way I would like to) fixes that rhyming situation...but yeah reading it you don't really get the same feel of it (obiviously).
#4
bump
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#5
^No bumping, plus your thread is titled wrongly.
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