#1
Wow, I've spent all evening on this song. I don't like the very end (last three measures or so), but I will keep playing with it. Hope you like it.

EDIT: Check below for update
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Last edited by aprescott_27 at Aug 10, 2006,
#2
Hmm I'm surprized no body has crit this yet.because it is a very well written piece. I enjoyed the verse's a lot. One thing I did not care for was the werid rythym with the lead in the refrain it seemed out of time.

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#3
I thought it was pretty good. The only thing that kinda bugged me about it was the guitar solo. It was a good solo, but there were too many rests in it, in places were rests..well..don't really sound well. Just try re-thinking the solo and you've got a pretty good song on your hands.
#5
^ No, I don't. Did I somehow rip off a song that I haven't even heard?
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#7
^^that suckkss i really liked this tab, the intro wasnt fantastic but as soon as the verse came in, from that point on i lovedd it. ESPECIALLY the rests in the solo, it kind of gave it a bluesy attitude
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#8
Hmm. The Death Cab for Cutie does sound similar. It looks like the verse has a similar chord progression. Not enough to make people think I ripped it off, though (I don't think ... )

On a better note (no pun intended) I have an updated version for you with a bass line and a better ending (I think.) Sorry if the bass is a tad loud, my laptop speaker has no bass whatsoever, so I have to jack the bass dynamics up just for it to be heard. I'm sure you know how to fix that if that's the problem.
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#9
yea it sounds like death cab for cutie. . . and i don't like them much at all, so i didn't like this song at all, it just doesn't sound appealing to me, i guess its just me though cause everyone else likes it
#10
loved the bass line, but it's a little hard to hear the solo...
i think that the intro lacked a little, it would be good to have some more variance.

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#11
i really liked it until i heard how similiar it was to the death cab for cutie song. I think it's far too coincidental that none of it was copied/based on.
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#12
^You're joking, right? I already said that I don't listen to Death Cab for Cutie.
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#13
It dont even really look the same tbh and the chords have different variations anyway, it was a co-incidence, there are millions of songs out there, some are bound to sound similar

Good job
#14
I loved all axcept the solo.
The idea is good but seems a bit messed up.
#15
yeah, i don't give a crap about death cab, this a good tab. I like how you took that little chromatic riff that's generally associated with metal and made jazzy and a little spanish. The intro is fine as well...it doesnt do much for me, but then..in measure 9 when the chords come in, it's awesome, it's a nice little suprise. it's cool that the intro doesn't really let you know where the song is going to go. good work.
#16
Intros kinda like the new maiden stuff. I dont like the rythm part near the start. That lead riff is cool tho. This song reminds me of pop stuff too, which isnt a bad thing. I dont particularly like the acoustic part at the end.

Overall, a nice little song. Good job.
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