#1
We don't have a vocalist yet, but this song is built for vocals and will be added later. A drum machine was used for the drums, and that will also be redone by our real drummer if we do decide to go forward with this song. No bass yet either. Both guitars done by me.

Crit 4 Crit. Thanks.

http://www.audiostreet.net/artist.aspx?artistid=48646

It's called 'New Condemned Song'.
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#2
not bad....the into cymbals are kinda loud. i like the echo effect around :41. Good idea, keep workin with it. Turn down the cymbals, get a bass line, and vocals and let me hear it again!

mine - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=408712
#3
ahh audiostreet, havent seen that in forever

pretty cool intro riff, nice for metalcore. i loive the harmony riff, then the fast picking with it, pretty sweet. you should defenitly add onto it, maybe go into a fast thrash part? (thats always my answer :-) or maybe a breakdown, wichever u like

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=406809
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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#4
im not really into this type of music, but i love what you have done with this. i agree with the echo buisness. i also love the way it comes in and builds up. the use of the two guitars is effective. you should definatly make it into a song, add some vocals and extend it a bit.

good work!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=410378

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#5
Thanks for the kind words. I'll definatly work on it.

Critting your guys' stuff now.
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#7
Ya guitar needs to be alot louder then your drums. You got some pretty decent riffs and they all seem to flow into the next one well. I'd just work on your mix a little but hell its unfinished and you mostlikely realize this.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=410829
#9
this could turn into a great song, especially liked the tremelo picking at the end
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