#1
Instinct

Verse

What am I suppose to do, when it?s so easy, to just give in
When all I hear, is temptation, calling my name

Who ever said you need an invitation?
It?s a welcoming only a fool would accept

Pre-chorus

And I?m a fool from the start
Too bad I never had a strong heart
Caught in the moment, mind racing fast
My weak will can hardly last

Chorus

I can?t fight the instinct inside of me
I can?t restrain these demons any longer

Verse

Giving in just once will open the flood gates
But I swear this will be the last time - I ever walk down that line

Pre-chorus

Chorus

I WANT TO GIVE IN

Chorus
Room For Error

Shows
6.30.05: 3 Doors Down, Staind, Breaking Benjamin
9.22.05: Disturbed, Ill Nino, 10 Years
4.1.06: Sevendust, Nonpoint
10.2.06: Red Hot Chili Peppers, The Mars Volta
11.21.06: Disturbed, Stone Sour, Flyleaf, Nonpoint
#2
Its pretty cool, it seems that you need another verse or two though..
#3
it didnt really blow me away, but im not saying it's bad. the flow is decent, also depending on the style of this song, i would say try to make the chours more memorbale, because thats the point of chourus, and this one isn really getting stuck in my mind, but that could just be because there is no music behind it. any ways i think it's a pretty solid piece.


crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6428748#post6428748
Old king cole was a merry old soul, a merry old soul was he.
He called for his pipe, and he called for his bowl( ****ing stoner)
and he called information for numbers he could have easily looked up in the phone book.
#4
thanks for the suggestions
Room For Error

Shows
6.30.05: 3 Doors Down, Staind, Breaking Benjamin
9.22.05: Disturbed, Ill Nino, 10 Years
4.1.06: Sevendust, Nonpoint
10.2.06: Red Hot Chili Peppers, The Mars Volta
11.21.06: Disturbed, Stone Sour, Flyleaf, Nonpoint