#1
Not really finished. Its really dissonant and theres a lot of tempo changes.

edit: oops that breakdown is supposed to repeat 4times.
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#2
That is appalling. Sorry.

Maybe if you're into stuff like Slipknot. But eh, it really hurts the ears.
#3
lol its alright. i was just experminenting. thanks for being honest though.


edit: and im into grind and brutal metalcore. and a little bit of death metal.
Last edited by ouchies at Aug 8, 2006,
#4
yeah diminshed 5 not a good idea. try reducing the dynamics of the diminished 5 so it doesn't stand out so much. yeah and try to use better sounding chords
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#5
Hey I thought is alright but the first part did remind me of crappy nu-metal, but as it went on it got better, I like the way you changed in and out of time signatures it made it feel different, than most pieces on here. I also enjoyed bars 17 to 24 because the dissonance really fits together. Add more to it, drums would definatly give more of a atomosphere.

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Last edited by guitarbreaker at Aug 8, 2006,
#6
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That is appalling. Sorry.

Maybe if you're into stuff like Slipknot. But eh, it really hurts the ears.

pretty much....no offense or anything...
#7
I Like this, reminds me of the fall of troy crossed with in flames or something like that, measures 17-24 were the best i like tempo/time sig changes like that.
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