Slight timing problems in the intro, but I can let them go. There's also a good bit of hiss in it as well.

The bass guitar and lead guitar's levels are too high. I'm getting some heavy clipping from them, lower the levels on them and while your at it, raise the vox levels.

Its a bit of a different tune and has a nice little groove going for it... just some minor mixing problems and some small timing issues.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=406545
Not bad. Pretty unique sound to it.

Obviously just the recording issues. Otherwise sounds fine.

Good work.

Black Hearts Now Reign
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Yea its got a good feel to it! I agree levels need to be adjust a little but other thatn that its good. Voice is good for most of it, got some good energy in there! 8/10
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