#1
Heres a grunge-acid song that has a real bluesy side to it. If you dont mine critting it that would be greatly appreciated.
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#2
Wow, thats a good song. The only thing I saw that you might need to change is the lead on the 1st and 3 frets of the B and E strings. You might wanna move that up a fret. But nice song.

Btw, loved the solo!
#7
the solo was awesome!

only thing though....

make the solo longer. lol.

i like my songs to be somewhere around 13 minutes. thats why i listen to "shine on u crazy diamond" or "the end"...
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#8
I liked the part with the single guitar doing that blues scale line, like at the beginning. That was cool. Maybe change up the rhythm in the part with the powerchords, because that got a little old. Add some triplets in, that should at least make it a little better.

Overall, I liked it.

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Last edited by aprescott_27 at Aug 10, 2006,