#1
*Do not be offended by this song, it's all in good fun.*


Verse Uno:
I was abducted by aliens just the other night,
It was late, I was asleep, so I could not fight,
They probably examined my brain, probably took out my spleen,
You had better keep in mind these aliens weren't green

Chorus:
I was abducted by illegal aliens
I was taken migrant Mexicans x2

Verse Dos:
ALl I had to do was give 'em a buck forty five,
And they let me go, a little shook up but alive,
I tried to tell the papers but they wouldn't believe,
My family thinks I'm crazy, for my sanity they grieve

Chorus:


Verse Tres:
I'm not a rascist, don't care 'bout the color of your face,
But when I order a Big Mac, I don't wanna hear "no hablo ingles",
If I offended you I apologize dearly,
But let me say it once more, loudly and clearly.

Chorus:

The End


Please do not be offended. thank you for your cooperation
#4
Thanks. I don't really like Blink182 but I do agree that it has that sound. We'll make it cool.
#6
^ wow lol...ill do a full crit in about 5 mintes, but while you wait, would you mind checking out one of mine? the links are in my sig, doesnt matter whic one.
#8
Quote by Smoothrider_41
wow. nice. lol

i miss blink 182 =(


no worries, we forgive you.
#9
lol, they were the only good gay power/pop punk band left. and now there gone, and all there is is gay charolette, and simple plan. i want to slit both bands throughts
#10
lol, God another politically incorrect song. This is f*cking hilarious! Dude, you can be next Weird Al, but without the covers, or the next Bloodhound without the sex anxiety attacks. Great job, really funny.
#11
I personally don't think there ever were any good gay power pop punk bands. How many of them can there be anyway, the label is so specific.
#12
^alot.

Anyway, sorry i cant do a full crit, my computer keeps frezzing, but heres what i can do.

Holy Sh**, that is funny, poor mexicans lol. Anyway, i cant really comment on conventional stuff like flow and ryme and all, but i will say this, this is really really good, like drunknnmunkey said, you could be the next weird al.


Mind checking one of mine? either one, it doesnt matter
#13
Thank you very very much for the Weird Al comparison. We are honored with lots of honor