#1
Everyday's words seem ordinary
Pain and bland in a colorful sphere
Simply encoded into binary
Just the typical wear and tear

Streets filled with similiar faces
All asking the same damn questions
Taking monotmous paces
With synomous expressions

You can't live life through a peephole
Wondering what is on the otherside
That slipping grip of control
Is the only rule left to abide

Breathe in this unknown air
As painful as it may seem
Could you even dare
To live outside of a dream?
#2
It flows very well, the stanzas seem kinda simple to me because all of them are 4 lines maybe try to go inbetween 6 and 4 lines to start.