#1
Meh written in a hour, about society in general. Crit for crit.

Look Around When Night and Silence Take Over

It?s not really a fact or a opinion, it?s just there
Gloaming innocently
Like a dove taking flight and drifting in mid-air
I know I?ll regret it like the last few and forget
Only to imprint myself once more

Dread will engulf me for a short period of time, thinking, grieving,
Maybe even thinking justly,
If that is possible with my current status
Of just whining and reminiscing
Worthless dreams of stardom and romance

We all dream but we all fall hard
Like our parents and grand parents
Who have given us blueprints
To live according and be a productive member of a so called ?society?
That blends us on what our race has done in past and also the actions we convey

Who really wants to live like this?
Who really wants to be known?
Who really wants to be loved?
I for sure do instead of being oppressed and compressed until I suppress.

It?s not really a fact or a opinion, it?s just there
Gloaming innocently
Engulfing people in a tornado
Making them only see when it is all quiet and whirling around them
Slowly and somber
Last edited by guitarbreaker at Aug 9, 2006,
#2
I am sure, If you put a bitchin melody to this, I'd love it.

Who really wants to live like this?
Who really wants to be known?
Who really wants to be loved?

I love it.
#3
god, its cool! really cool, but i still dnt get the relation between the song n its title.
I like the first n the last parts...anyways, thnxxx 4 de amazin work, its all good, peace