#1
V1

Broken dreams a missed oppurtunities
No more chances at happinedd dont let the memories go
Without you, my thoughts are on show
So broken down with no place to be
Home in the cold with all my misery

Chorus

I dont have to fight you anymore
You can live your life all on your own
Don't you wish you had me by your side
Fall to pieces forget to start again
Once upon a time we were just friends
Then i went to far and it broke your heart

V2

Not seen you here in a while
I've been so used to seeing your smile
The way you felt when you were with me
You Predicted something you couldn't see


if i could just get a wee crit on it and maybe some ideas on how to improve it that would be much appreciated

thanks in advance
Jonny Toye
Orinally Posted by HorridxHopes

This is the smartest question ever posted in the pit. I commend you.


I asked about theory of reality and this is what someone said to me!