a short, introductory acoustic number i wrote to open up the ep we're gonna be recording soon(ish (hopefully))

i've put the lyrics in above the vocal melody, which when recorded will acually be played with the guitar still.

Pick Apart.zip
Last edited by squidlips at Aug 9, 2006,
thanks for the crit dude, forced in what way? would you reccomend changing up the lead, or rythm, or both?

thanks again
I thought it was really good. I loved the vocal melody. And I agree with guitarbreaker. The ending did sound a bit forced. The 2 leads kinda sounded funny together. Change those and it'll be really good. 8/10.