This is something I came up with this morning. I think it has a Pantera, hard-rock southern feel to it, which I really like. It's obviously a work in progress, but I'd like to get some crit on what I've got right now.

Any suggestions, crit whatever. It's all welcome!
And I'm happy to do crit for crit!
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The intro was alright but was a little boring, it does remind me pantera but not so much southeren, probarly the tuning. Keep on expanding it.
pretty good, i liked it, that verse was well written

crit mine? (in the sig)
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