#1
this is about my breakup with my girlfriend of 2 years. its not emo, so please dont say it is, it is generic though, which i regret, but hell. write what you know.


maybe im just a dreamer
all i want to do is to
put my hand on you
again, like before
when you still had that smile
and you still had that blush

maybe its just habit
that im missing
memories and pictures
notes and poems
songs that had us
at first note

angels never flew so low
since that day long ago
now that you're away, i guess
they couldnt be here to stay

maybe were better off
i go left while you go right
but if we were coming from
opposite directions
we'd still be holding hands

maybe its only real
once i take our picture down
if you and i had it our way
that photo mightve stuck around

angels never flew so low
since that day long ago
now that you're away, i guess
they couldnt be here to stay
i shwung and i shwinged
but it never really shwang
#2
It's not that bad the rythym is a little messed up but still pretty good just keep writing
Oh yeah please crit my song if you get the chance It's called alone
#3
yea, u need 2 practise a lil, but its aint bad, i get the idea of ur feelings