#1
This is probably the most conventional song i have written.
The words in brackets are sang at the same time as the last word before them


Take up the sword,
And a black line is drawn through the works of your forefathers. (front runners)
Unchain the gate,
And your future will be known for all to see and ridicule (worship)
Stay your hand for the fallen,
Or you will be unmasked for the horror you truly are (will be)
Make a move toward that button,
And our counterplay will begin.

Flee the scene of the breach,
And we won't lose your trail through the true (liars)
Bend the wills of the masses,
And your name will be erased from the book of life (calamity)
Silence your benefactors
Else you should find yourself falling towards derangement (sedation)
Make a move toward that button,
And our countercurse will start.

The role you must play is decided
No parts are left unwritten
Look upon the silhouetted hill
See you comrades swinging
Now come along quietly
Lest others hear your scream.

Weighing up the motives
Cannot save your hope
It wasn't going to take much longer
Some don't even try
Can you hear the whisper carried on the wind?
It isn't your time...

Shake the hand of faith
And feel the supreme release of doubt (truth)
Follow us into conviction
And revel in the knowledge you've done well (failed)
Inform the world we know our stuff
We will let you go about your sunrise-to-sunset (chores)
Make a move toward that button,
Oh but there isn't a chance of that.


The role you must play is decided
No parts are left unwritten
Look upon the silhouetted hill
See you comrades swinging
Now come along quietly
Lest others hear your scream.

Weighing up the motives
Cannot save your hope
It wasn't going to take much longer
Some don't even try
Can you hear the whisper carried on the wind?
It isn't your time...
Last edited by willtheworld at Aug 10, 2006,
#3
cool cool cool, what i really like is the chorus, especially the second part, and a phrase
'make a move toward that button'...i like it
but i think its kinda complecated song, did u already compose the music???
P.S.- i gotta new simple song 'Goodbye', check it out!
#5
wow. Thats amazing. One of the best Ive read in a long time.
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#7
well...the way I interpret it is that its about the George-man. care to crit mine? Its "My Apology"
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#11
I love how you used the bracketed words, it sounds so cool in my head. The flow to this song is awesome, good work dude.

Crit one of mine?
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#12
this is very complex... lol i like it....could you explain it to me better?
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#15
ohhh....i get it man...i hate how people do that! why would they go out of their way to hurt someone? sorry, i was "the loser" when i was little so i know how it feels to bbe like that....crit my stufff if you want...
peace out
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