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Human Intervention, And The Waste Of Life

Well as I now hope you see,
I?ve got nothing in the world.
Not a leg to stand on,
nor a shoulder to cry on.

So pass,
this,
life,
through feeding tubes to revive it?s heartbeat.

And now, I find you here.
Screaming at what used to be my face.
Just like the weather, it has changed.
I?m not the same as I used to be,
find myself defined and rearranged.
I hope you like me better this way.

So pass,
this,
life,
through feeding tubes in a desperate attempt
to regain some kind of consciousness.

And without you, I used to think that I was nothing,
but now I can?t think,
so I don?t know what you mean to me.

I,
destroyed every single f*cking lie
I thought you told about me
in close company, behind my back.

Well, now. I?m the one you?ve destroyed,
and now I?m bleeding for more.

And pass,
this,
life,
through feeding tubes of hope and resurrection.

Find,
your,
self,
for I cannot find you for you.

Find,
your,
self,
cuz I am much to busy building a life.

The one, that you destroyed so long ago.
And I watched it crumble.
And I felt so helpless,
when it came to stopping it.

I hope you?re happy with
everything that you have done.
I know I?m not,
so I?m guessing you are.

I used to believe in love,
until you showed me, how much nothing it was!

And Pass!
This!
Life!
Through feeding tubes!
In an attempt to bring it back.
Run, Run Farmer. Screaming! Bloody Murder
The daughters of question have been murdered!
Murdered! Murdered!
#2
My god, that's long.

"So pass,
this,
life,
through feeding tubes" is the basis of this song and is the best part of it. I'm not saying I love it, but it is pretty good. As for the rest of the song, it seems to be cathartic teeny stuff and I guess it does a reasonable job of that. I'm guessing you are writing in the style of pop punk or emo, so it works for that.

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