#1
Well, this is my new thread for my song Riffage, because I didn't follow the rules(sorry mods, it won't happen again, I promise. ) and my other one got closed. Anyway, I seemed to get good reviews on this song, so I started to add on. I got a pre-verse after the first chorus, a verse 2, and working on ideas for an interlude then work my way into a solo. Any comments/suggestions for the revised version would be much appreciated.

P.S. If you don't like it, please don't be a douchebag and bash the hell out of it, be considerate and maybe give me some pointers?
Attachments:
Riffage.zip
#2
I liked this one, im a big fan of this style and there were some great riffs on it and some ideas that i couldnt see myself coming up with. It was a bit unstructured though, id really like to hear it with some drums and mabe vocals.

If you get the chance id be very grateful if you could crit these.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=411450
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=411451
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#3
pure Schuldiner style harmonizing... this is a good example of how to be original in a very unoriginal genre. the time signature cahnges make a big difference. alot of the riffs seemed based off each other too much as well.
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#5
wow...
thats all i can say
it was great

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Last edited by Fatt Sorum at Aug 12, 2006,