#1
First attempt ever at writing lyrics.. tips, hints, everyting is usefull:P

Inside her dying eyes
I can see the pain she holds inside
And tonight she will see the end
But her soul will be set free

With open eyes
She will see her death
And as her body dies
Her pain will be released

Tonight she decided
She must die
Her body hurts to bad
For her to carry on

With open eyes
She will see her death
And as her body dies
Her pain will be released

And while her body falls to the ground
Her eyes are filled with tears
On the ground people scream in fear
Because death is so near.

With open eyes
She will see her death
And as her body dies
Her pain will be released
Gear:

Ibanez V50 acoustic ( my first love)
Ibanez 442 RTR ( my second love)
Laney Linebacker Reverb 30Watt
#3
whos this about? i think its a good song, also wondering what music youll put to it, yeah i liked it good song, good writing

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#5
The music I haven´t decided but I´m thinking about a kinda Trivium style sound of it.
Gear:

Ibanez V50 acoustic ( my first love)
Ibanez 442 RTR ( my second love)
Laney Linebacker Reverb 30Watt