#1
well. This is definately not like my usual. Ive already got music for it. Its all acoustic, yet played in Drop C or D Standard. Here goes:

My Apologies:


I went to the city
with nothing else to do.
I went to the city,
with all intentions of finding you.
I lost all my money.
I lost it on a bet.
I said I'd never find you,
but losing it was something I'll never regret.

Chorus:
I left you in Phoenix,
with another girl on my mind.
I left you in Phoenix,
and I never will know why.
I said that I loved you,
said you were my everything.
So, this is my apology,
I hope it helps to ease your pain.

I went to our neighborhood.
I went to our old stomping grounds.
I asked everyone in sight,
if they had seen you around.
They said you were working
at the local grocery store.
I stopped in just to say hi,
and as always, wished for more.

Chorus:
I left you in Phoenix,
with another girl on my mind.
I left you in Phoenix,
and I never will know why.
I said that I loved you,
said you were my everything.
So, this is my apology,
I hope it helps to ease your pain

I walked in the door,
not knowing just what to expect.
I saw you standing there,
wearing that horrible cashier's vest.
You looked up at me,
with that gaze, that I miss.
Your beautiful glowing eyes,
reminded me of our first kiss.
So, you cried on my shoulder,
getting my T-shirt soaken wet.
I whispered "I love you",
and,"you're something I'll never regret"

chorus:
I left you in Phoenix,
with another girl on my mind.
I left you in Phoenix,
and I never will know why.
I said that I loved you,
said you were my everything.
So, this is my apology,
I hope it helps to ease your pain

This is my apology (repeated to fade)
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#2
i really like it...seems like your really reminiscing(sp?) and it has helped you turn out a good piece
#4
i like it too!...its like so true, not made up feelings, anyways, good job
i would like you to see my song called "Goodbye", find it somewhere round n crit if you wann,thnx
#5
Well, thanks to all of yall. But, no this exact situation didnt happen. Its loosely, and I mean LOOSELY based around a situation I was in. I did leave my girlfriend of 3 years for another girl, however I dont regret it. But, thanks again.
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#7
Wow that was quite good, I liked it, actually...I can't really fault it, it could be longer .
You made a really good mental image in my head. Good job
.Brand New.Bright Eyes.This Will Destroy You.

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#8
thank you...thank you.
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.
#9
Hey man, that was good i liked it, the only thing that kinda, and i mean only slightly put me off was the amount of repetition, i mean you started so many lines with I. But otherwise yea good, painted a good picture in my head...
#10
honestly, when I actually sing it, I cut out about half of them. it makes the rhythm better
If to live is to die, then is to die to live? Thats a bunch of S_H_I_T.