#1
You Will

You will pay a recompense
for your misguded reticence,
your hesitation, your failure.
You will lose what you thought was sure,
cry out from pain you can't endure
and you will die inside.
You will question your belief,
you will beg and plead for relief
from progress, from change.
You will pray for thongs to be as they once were,
racked with your sorrow, you will be brought to her,
on your knees, you will be rejected.
Bleeding, you will be rejected.
Kicking, screaming, you will be rejected.
Ignorant, you will be accepted.
Indifferent, you will be accepted.
Unknowing, uncaring, you will be accepted.
there are doors that open
there are doors that dont

A recent study shows that 8% of teenagers listen to nothing but music with guitars in it. Put this in your sig if you're one of the 92% who aren't close-minded morons.
Last edited by curtis uck at Aug 12, 2006,
#2
wow, you know the first time i read it i didnt understand much and i couldnt pick p the way of reading, but when i scanned over again i found it good, really.
1 small sugestion, in the lines:
"you will pray for things to be as they once were,
racked with sorrow, you will be brought to her"
.....i think it will be better if you do "racked with your sorrow"........it will give a bit better flow of words.
Appart from that thang is cool, u can see my stuff too, feel free around, peace
#3
yeah thats a good idea. thanks, man. come on people, dont be shy, comment.
there are doors that open
there are doors that dont

A recent study shows that 8% of teenagers listen to nothing but music with guitars in it. Put this in your sig if you're one of the 92% who aren't close-minded morons.
#4
edited!
there are doors that open
there are doors that dont

A recent study shows that 8% of teenagers listen to nothing but music with guitars in it. Put this in your sig if you're one of the 92% who aren't close-minded morons.