#1
This is a song that I made, that i think is half decent. I don't really know about the verse though. I have no idea what to do next. Please crit, and, you know, give me ideas for what to do...
#2
it was a good song nice struture.....u shud prolly throw in a fast solo or break down...8/10....btw can u tell me what u think about mine...ITS NOT DONEHERE
#3
yea thats what i wanted to do, but all i could think of was Thrice's under a Killing Moon riff. My chorus actually sounds like it too... damnit.