A friend of mine wrote these lyircs about himself and involving other people and I decided to write and record a song with the lyrics.

The song itself is short just over 2 minutes but I think it is very good in all. Tell me what you think!

Give me a link and i'll give u criticism back as and when.
3rd one down - 'Joely Poely'
Vocals are great on this. Intruments were great, was that a real drum kit, or just a drum machine? The lyrics were funny, but almost a little depressing. The song almost reminds of something you'd hear from modest mouse.
lol ha this is funny. great production overall, except like mine the quality isnt quite pristine. the drums sound pretty reall aswell, what did u use for them? or are they real. good stuff, not my style but its great! keep it up.