#1
A friend of mine wrote these lyircs about himself and involving other people and I decided to write and record a song with the lyrics.

The song itself is short just over 2 minutes but I think it is very good in all. Tell me what you think!

Give me a link and i'll give u criticism back as and when.
http://lukas.dmusic.com/
3rd one down - 'Joely Poely'
Orophin
#2
Vocals are great on this. Intruments were great, was that a real drum kit, or just a drum machine? The lyrics were funny, but almost a little depressing. The song almost reminds of something you'd hear from modest mouse.
#3
lol ha this is funny. great production overall, except like mine the quality isnt quite pristine. the drums sound pretty reall aswell, what did u use for them? or are they real. good stuff, not my style but its great! keep it up.