#1
Hello. I'd been working on this recording and it now has all of the little touches it needs. It rocks out at the end, with drum fills played by yours truly, a guitarist. There's even horns and harmonies. It's fun. Check it out and tell me what you think.

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http://gabekeller.dmusic.com



Lyrics:
ll the little monkeys
know the names of the stars
But the heavy-hearted look on
and shake their heads

Today could be that day
the one you've been waiting for
the one where you
tie up all your loose ends

And you Become
the moon and sun
the tears and the stars are pushing you on
And you Become
daughter and son
here by the star that we all call the suuuuuuuun

Here's a little seedling
plant it deep in the ground
And maybe someday if we're patient
it will see the sky

You know it reminds me of a song that
made me cry
Just the fact that we're still waiting for

A time when we'll Become
a tree that reaches the sun
the tears and the stars are pushing us on
And we'll Become
six billion of One
here by the star that we all call the suuuuuuuun

Shelter turns to storm
and waves wash away
the sandcastles on the shore
and you're shipwrecked
with a faulty oar
and the chain around your neck
is dragging you down
to the ocean floor

But someday...
We'll all Become
the moon and sun
the tears and the stars are pushing us on
And we'll Become
daughter and son
the tears and the stars are pushing us on
And we'll Become
and drop our guns
the tears and the stars are showing us love
and we'll become
what we started from
the tears and the stars are singing our song
And I'll become and you'll become
And he'll become and she'll become
And we'll become and we'll become....
Last edited by Incaboy481 at Aug 12, 2006,
#2
i liek some of your other stuff as well
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#4
I'm using a cheap ten dollar mic on acoustic guitar and most vocals, then in the middle of recording i upgraded to a 60 dollar audio technica instument mic.

Gabe
#5
So when I try to stream "Become" it says the codec isnt supported by my windows media player.. so i try to download it.. and the website says its missing or unreadable? So whats the deal here?
#6
Your stream seems to be broken my friend.

I listened to your other recordings, and they are great! You have talent young one, keep it up!
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