#1
Normally I play guitar, but I felt like making a bass riff.



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#2
ok....

Nice two bars.

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Quote by Quik Axe Player
Normally I play guitar, but I felt like making a bass riff.



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#7
Zian, why don't you say what you're trying to say in way I can understand you.

Tears, are you saying "thats crap" or "that sucks"?

Welsh, you hope I am taking a piss, what the hell? Please rewrite what you are trying to say.
#8
What there saying is, that your thread is a waste of time. What do you want us to say? Hey i like your 4 notes?

If you want productive responses, be serious and post something that you actually want criticized.

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#9
Smoke On The Water had 4 notes, and it's not a waste of time. My riff is 4 notes, and it's not waste of time either.

In case you forget, here is Smoke On The Water:


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#10
he's right guys, they're written under the same genius concept!

then again, after a second look, i guess the only difference is that his sounds like sh!t and is completly useless.
#11
actually i beleive THIS is smoke on the water
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#12
It sounds decent enough, but the problem is that it sounds so generic. It's not bad because it's simple, it's bad because it's probably been done so many times that it just isn't fresh, unique, or the least bit exciting. Still, any bass line can be made to sound great with the right complementing music, so it's up to you.

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#13
If it was done right, and maybe a few liberties taken with the rhythm, it wouldn't be a bad line for a funk sort of song.

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