#1
everything is slow exept the repieted part.... umm i just wrote it and i need some sugestions on the bad parts... its hard to show people some songs because i cant tell you the way i sing it....
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your drank your beer
you watched t.v.
but hell you ment the world to me

i didnt care i got abused
i was just so lucky to have you
and when you said you that didnt love me
i pretended not to hear it
i liked to make you coffe
and put lots of suger in it

but i guess you didnt care at all
cause you lost me in the shoping mall

and then i was left crying
my heart was slowley dieng
i didnt want to disapoint you
i worked hard to get my slef through

only 10 years later
i put my best suit on
my heart has been hit by a crater
i cant go like this for to long


and when i saw the casket
of the father that never loved me
i remembered every hit
and everytime he used to beet me


and then i was left crying
my heart was slowley dieng
i didnt want to disapoint you
i worked hard to get my slef through

and if i had the chance
id live it all again
because in the end
you where my only friend
and even though you never loved me
you where the best i ever got to see
#2
in the first verse I thought you're a woman
in the second verse I thought you're a woman
in the third verse I was confused
in the fourth verse I was confused some more
in the fifth verse I had no idea what the hell is going on
in the sixth I finally got it.........

but don't worry....it's probably just me....and my sharpness.....
.....i'm gonna capture a gideon
#4
I'm sorry if my comment ofended you (or her) in any way....that is not a topic to joke about
.....i'm gonna capture a gideon
#6
....yes I got that (you being a dude)......
....I didn't thought I did but just in case cuz I know a girl who had a similar problem so.....
....anyway...let's drop the subject....let's leave it in verses......

...btw...check out mine(song).......I know you.
.I would appreciate the comment.....I posted it a bit earlier
.....i'm gonna capture a gideon