I like the lead tone very much. Reminescent of Slash kind of. I think the rhythm guitar could use a little work, for one reason: Muddiness.
Try taking off some bass and boost the mid a little to make it more clear.
BTW, the song sounded like AC/DC in the middle.
Overall, I like the tone.

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>Ibanez RG7620 (7 string)

Originally Posted by Outside Octaves
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