#1
Crit 4 Crit

as i lay in my bed restless
heart beat racing
feeling breathless
my palms soaked in sweat
the day that we first met
was my life
and with my screams
i cant escape from these dreams

everytime i see her face
my heart quickens in it's pace
everytime i dream
her face becomes a burden to my life
during the day
her blue eyes shine bright
during the night
they cry
crimson tears

as i stand in that troubled place
the scene returns to my life
her screams of agony
kill me inside
and i cant do anything to save her life
with my screams
i cant escape from
these dreams

everytime i see her face
my heart quickens in it's pace
everytime i dream
i cant get away from her scream
during the day
her blue eyes shine bright
during the night
they cry
crimson tears

during the day
her blue eyes shine bright
during the night
they cry

during the day
her blue eyes shine bright
during the night
they cry
crimson tears

in loving memory of katherine tan you always have a place in my heart

note: i know blue eyes are cliche but you cant call them something their not and i know i used screams alot in this song
#2
true thing about blue eyes... wow this is a powereful song, man, good job, use of "scream" is something significant, im guessing? am i right? oh curious, what music is it, i would think like a acoustic with maybe a distortion at the end?

oh and can you check out this wierd thing im doing its called The Other Side...? Scene 2 is brand new (put up today) check it out, in sig?
#3
yeah pretty much electric but with no distortion till the end.
and i checked out the window youre a really talented writer. i left some names in there
#4
ok cool, hey youre post on mine musta not gone through, i cant see it, did ya close the window too early? can you retry please?
Last edited by AmplifySilence at Aug 14, 2006,
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