#1
the poorper man from paris,
carried the flower of glaris,
dont ask me why,
i was told by a man with a glass eye,
who new a parrrot called alice


the duke of donington jump in a wyre,
but a fish caught him on the ear,
so he got up and howled "get me out of here",
and swam all the way back home to calm himself with a beer.


snakes slide sideways ,so simple sentances are hard to say.


fat girls never have much sun, because there big butts block out the sun.


please feel free to use my lymirics , if thats how u spell it,in your lyrics.
#2
im sorry but its very bad.
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#3
You'll need to work out how many lines/syllables a limerick has before we'd use them. Plus, we can probably write our own.

First one's better, though it doesn't make sense, and I always feel that if you're going to be funny, you have to take it seriously to get it right.
Cheers,
- Neil
#4
why do i agree with these dudes above????? maybe cause they are RIGHT????!
#5
Yah, its sounds like a silly poem you'd hear in middle school. But i guess it was for fun. I agree though it was bad. sorry
#6
oh well im not tryin to right a hole big song, which i have done and there alright,just thoughti would lightened up the feeling round here.Everyone is writing doom and gloom songs think people need to cheer up.
#7
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oh well im not tryin to right a hole big song, which i have done and there alright,just thoughti would lightened up the feeling round here.Everyone is writing doom and gloom songs think people need to cheer up.

that's good man, definatly dont stop writing.
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